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On the last January,2009 I went to Yogyakarta with my all family.I woke up at 8 a.m and I did prepare.After I prepared,I took a bath.Because I went to train station at 3 p.m to Yogyakarta.I was tired and I got headache.Because six hours I must sit down in the train.
At 9 p.m I arrived in the train station in Yogyakarta.And my family and I decided to rent two cars.But I lost my father!!So I called my mother and in the fact,he rode a pedicap.About 15 minutes I arrived in the hotel and I felt hungry.I was happy,because in front of the hotel many vendor.Then,I bought fried rice.
The next day,My uncle was rent a bus,so my family and I went to Parangtritis beach.It was fantastic!!I looked a beautiful scenery.Although in Parangtritis has hot air,but I felt enjoy.I played water with my sister.In there I didn’t know if the sand is very hot.So,I was crying when I went to parking area.After that my family and I ate.At 3 p.m I went to the hotel,but the bus broke down.So my uncle was angry to the driver.About 2 hours I arrived in the hotel from Parangtritis beach.I was tired.And I was swimming when my parents eat.At 7 p.m I walked around in the Malioboro.I bought two the same clothes to my boy friend and me.
The third day or the last day to me.In the morning,I went to
At 10 a.m I went to home from yogyakarta.I arrived in
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your paragraph is enough,..
BalasHapusyour grammar have some mistakes in your paragraph,..
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Wildania(120810477G)
BalasHapuswow intereating experience i think,,,
Ur paragraphs are good,,
But u described it too much,,and sometimes I'm little confused read yours,,coz it's too wide n not too focus..
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BalasHapusHi dea....
Thank you for your comment before.
- I think your paragraph is good enough, but it isn't focus.
_ About your grammar, so far so good I think.
Hi.dee
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough,,even there are some mistake on your writing,,,you do the best on writing and you focusing on your moment,,
that's all my comment,,
thank's,,
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Hi.. dea..
BalasHapusI think your paragraph is quiet interesting for me..
eventhough there are some mistakes on your paragraph.
Check your grammar..
Okay.
Don't forget to give me comment too.
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